11-4. But in an old man who has known human joys and sorrows, and has achieved whatever work it was in him to do, the fear of death is somewhat abject and ignoble.
【译文】但对于经历了人世悲欢、履行了个人职责的老人,害怕死亡就有些可怜且可耻了。
【讲解】whatever work it was in him to do作achieved的宾语从句。这里的in表示能力。in him即他有能力。whatever work相当于any work,作do的宾语。it是形式主语,to do才是真正的主语。who has known…him to do为定语从句,修饰an old man, has known和has achieved为who的并列谓语。
【单词和短语】
abject:可鄙的,卑鄙的(an abject action or expression shows that your feel very ashamed),
例如:
an abject coward 可鄙的懦夫
an abject fear 卑怯
abject另一常见意为“绝望无助的,凄苦可怜的(the state of being extremely poor, unhappy, unsuccessful etc)”,
例如:
abject poverty 赤贫
abject failure 惨败
ignoble:卑鄙的;不光彩的;可耻的(ignoble thoughts, feelings, or actions are ones that you should feel ashamed or embarrassed about),
例如:
an ignoble purpose 卑鄙的目的
There’s something cowardly and ignoble about such an attitude.
这样的态度有点怯懦可鄙。
11-5. The best way to overcome it—so at least it seems to me—is to make your interests gradually wider and more impersonal, until bit by bit the walls of the ego recede, and your life becomes increasingly merged in the universal life.
【译文】克服这种恐惧的最佳办法是——至少我这样看——逐渐扩大你的兴趣范围并不为个人情感所左右,直至像一堵高墙的自我一点一点离开你,而你的生活则越来越融合于大众的生活之中。
【讲解】so at least it seems to me系插入语,是倒装语序,自然语序是at least it seems so to me,这里的it指整个句子。overcome后的it指fear of death。to make your interests…impersonal作表语。the walls of the ego系暗喻(metaphor)修辞手法,意为“像一堵高墙的自我”。
【单词和短语】
impersonal:非个人的;非特指某一个人的;不受个人感情(或偏见)影响的,客观的(not showing any feelings of sympathy, friendliness, etc),
例如:
The teacher’s criticism of the class was impersonal.
教师对班级的批评并非针对某个同学。
impersonal assessment 客观的评价
11-6. An individual human existence should be like a river—small at first, narrowly contained within its banks, and rushing passionately past boulders and over waterfalls.
【译文】每个人的生活都应像河水一样——开始是涓涓细流,限制在狭窄的两岸之间,然后热烈地冲过巨石,滑下瀑布。
【讲解】an individual human…a river是明喻(simile)修辞手法,small at first…over waterfalls构成延伸比喻(extended metaphor),延伸比喻是把原比喻加以延伸,对原比喻作进一步说明。这里的破折号引出说明语。
【单词和短语】
passionately的形容词形式为passionate,的名词形式为passion。
11-7. Gradually the river grows wider, the banks recede, the waters flow more quietly, and in the end, without any visible break, they become merged in the sea, and painlessly lose their individual being.
【译文】其后河面逐渐展宽,两岸相距愈远,水流也愈趋平缓,最后则注入大海,与海水浑然一体,了无痕迹,河水自然而然就此消失了。
【讲解】本句作者仍然运用延伸比喻手法,是对明喻like a river进一步延伸说明。与上句不同之处在于,前句的延伸比喻由一系列短语构成,本句的延伸比喻则由一系列短句构成。
【单词和短语】
painless:不难的,不费力的(not difficult or unpleasant to do),
例如:
the painless way to learn Chinese
学汉语的简易方法
11-8. The man who, in old age, can see his life in this way, will not suffer from the fear of death, since the things he cares for will continue.
【译文】能够这样理解自己一生的老人将不会因害怕死亡而痛苦,因为他所珍爱的一切都将继续存在。
【讲解】who, in old age, can see his life in this way为定语从句,修饰man。he cares for是定语从句,作things的定语。
11-9. And if, with the decay of vitality, weariness increases, the thought of rest will be not unwelcome.
【译文】而且,如果随着精力的衰退,疲倦之感与日俱增,长眠并非是不受欢迎的念头。
【讲解】with the decay of vitality作状语,修饰increases。提前乃是为了强调。the thought of rest,这里的rest指death,乃是委婉语(euphemism)。委婉语即是把粗鲁或不中听的话改用温和顺耳的话表达。will be not unwelcome是双重否定结构。否定式谓语+含否定意义的词构成双重否定,表示委婉语气。
又如:
What’s done cannot be undone. 已经做了的事后悔也无用。
I could not disobey him. 我是不得不服从他的。
【单词和短语】
unwelcome:(自己)不想要的,(令本人)讨厌的,尴尬的(something that is unwelcome is not wanted, especially because it might cause embarrassment or problems),
例如:
I feared that my arrival might draw the unwelcome attention of officials.
我担心我的到达可能会引起官员们的注意,而这正是我不希望的。
11-10. I should wish to die while still at work, knowing that others will carry on what I can no longer do, and content in the thought that what was possible has been done.
【译文】我倒希望死于尚能劳作之时,因为知道他人将继续我未竟的事业,我大可因为已竭尽所能而心存安慰。
【讲解】I should wish to die中用should表示委婉语气,意为“我倒希望”。while still at work中while和still之间省略了I am。时间状语从句中主语与主句的主语相同或是it时,这从句里的主语和动词be可省略。knowing that…no longer do作原因状语,修饰wish to die。content in the thought…done与knowing…do并列作原因状语,形容词content前省略了being。what was possible是主语从句。
【单词和短语】
carry on:继续,进行;经营(if you carry on a particular kind of work or activity, you do it or take part in it),
例如:
They carried on the discussion late into the night.
他们一直讨论到深夜。