One possible version:
Students in our school have one thing in common—an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. Girls also like sports. Some of them they want to lose weight, to be slim and pretty by doing sports.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
1. 评分原则:
1) 本题总分12分,按四个档次评分。
2) 评分时应先读文章,根据内容要点的多少、词汇和语法结构的使用是否准确、上下文是否连贯及语言表述是否得体,初步确定其所属档次;然后根据拼写、语法等错误的多少在本档次内斟情给分。
3) 主谓关系齐全,意思相关,即要点成立,均酌情给分;如书写较差,影响信息传递,将分数降低一个档次;词数少于60的,从总分中减去1分。
2. 内容要点:
1) 学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异。
2) 多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己。
3) 男孩们参加各项体育活动,希望运动能使自己更强壮。
4) 女孩们也喜欢运动,希望运动能帮助自己减肥和保持苗条。
5) 你对运动的观点。
3. 评分范围和要求:
第四档10-12分(优)能写出五个要点,行文连贯,语言基本无误,完全达到写作要求。第三档7-9分(良)能写出四个要点,行文基本连贯,语言有少量错误,基本达到写作
要求。
第二档4-6分(中)能写出二至三个要点,语言虽有较多错误,但尚能达意。
第一档1-3分(差)只能写出一、二个句子或个别单词,语言错误较多,未能达到写作要求。如果未表达任何与本题内容有关的信息或只字未写,得0分。