One Possible Version:

Reading Outside Class

       As we all know, reading has a lot of benefit. It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge, and it makes us wiser and richer in life. I like reading newspapers and magazines, from which I get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world. I also read story books and novels in my spare time which make me relaxed and happy. I seldom read e-books because they're bad for eyes. On weekends, I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.

      Summer vacation is coming. I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. I'm sure reading can make a difference to my life.

评分意见：

（一）总体原则

考查学生综合运用语言的能力，注重语言表达的意义和流畅性。

（二）内容要点

1.benefit

2.what 

What kind of books do you like reading? Why?

3.habit

Do you read e-books? Why or why not?

When do you usually read?

How long do you read a day or a week?

4.plan

（三）评分档次

1.第一档（13－15分）

信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。

2.第二档（10－12分）

信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达。

3.第三档（7－9分）

能传递部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读。

4.第四档（4－6分）

只能传递少量信息，表达不通顺，只有少量句子可读。

5.第五档（1－3分）

只能传递个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。

（四）建议

4个内容要点，“benifit”为3分，其它3个要点各4分。