2012年广安市初中毕业生学业考试英语试题卷书面表达
今年我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动。在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天，你校组织志愿者去广安敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。假如你是广安七中学生张华，请你将活动情况介绍给美国朋友Ben，与他分享你的美好经历。（活动内容见下表）:
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活动时间 |
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活动地点 |
广安敬老院（Guang’an Nursing Home） |
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参加人员 |
学校志愿者（volunteer） |
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活动形式 |
1．送去鲜花和水果 2．帮助打扫卫生 3．陪老人聊天（chat with sb）、唱歌、跳舞 4．送去美好祝愿 5．…… |
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活动感想 |
关爱（care for）老人（the elderly people），尊重（respect）老人 |
要求：
1．短文应包括
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3．文章不低于80词。开头、结尾已给出。
Dear Ben,
Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.
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If you have the chance in
Yours,
Zhang Hua
范文
Dear Ben,
Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.
As soon as we volunteers got to Guang’an Nursing Home, they gave us a warm welcome. We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. Then we sang and danced. How happy we were! After that, we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them. The elderly people were very excited. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness. But I felt it our duty to care for the elderly people and respect them.
If you have the chance in
Yours,
Zhang Hua
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