学会分享很重要。你有哪些东西要分享?可采取哪些方式分享?请根据图示内容,结合自身的一次经历,写一篇短文,并阐述分享的意义。
要求:
1.要点齐全,并适当发挥;
2.词数:80词左右(开头已给出、不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学佼名称。
Sharing
It’s very important to learn to share with each other._______
One possible version:
Sharing
It’s very important to learn to share with each other. I have many things to share in different ways.For example,I can share some beautiful pictures,favorite music,different ideas with others face to face or by QQ, e-mail which are widely used. Now I’d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.
Emily was lonely and unhappy.I hoped to cheer her up.So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after class.As time went by,she became used to sharing her feelings with me.Now we’re good friends.
In a word,sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up.We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.
短文写作评分建议:
一档(13—14分):能紧扣主题,内容具体、丰富。用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达完整、字迹清楚、几乎没有语言错误、具备较强的语言运用能力,完全达到了预期的写作目的。
二档(10一12分):能紧扣主题,应用的语言结构和词汇能满足任务要求,句子较通顺、表达较清楚、有少量语言错误,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
三档(7—9分):基本能扣主题,内容不够丰富、具体,字数较少。语言表达过于简单、句子不够通顺、行文不够连贯、有部分语言错误。
四档(4—6分):所写的内容与主题有关,但内容较少、语言不规范、句子无条理、行文不连贯、语言错误较多。
五档(0一3分):所写内容与主题几乎无关,内容杂乱,不知所云。语言很不通顺,用词很不准确,错误过多,几乎难以读懂。
说明:1.相同的错误不重复扣分。
2.多写不扣分。