假如你是某中学初三(1)班班长李华, 请你为校报“英语园地”写一篇短文;记述前天主题班会“To be sent to school or not”的讨论情况。
内容要点:
1.部分学生认为上学应该接送,省时又安全。
2.部分学生认为步行或骑自行车是最好的方式,环保又健身。
3.你的看法和建议。
注意: 1.词数:80-100;
2.可是当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不要出现真实校名和人名。
To Be Sent To School Or Not
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【答案】
We had a discusion about whether we should be sent to school or not. We have two main ideas.
Some students think that it can save the students’time if parents send them to school. And parents want to make sure the students are safe, especially when the weather is terrible.
However, our city is more and more crowded and polluted, so other students think going to school on foot or by bike is the best way. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for our health. What’s more, if we walk,or ride a bike, there will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now.
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot or by bike.
写作亮点:这篇短文系统、全面地阐明了自己对于家长开车送孩子上学和步行上学的利弊,表达出了自己的最终倡议,文中包含了提纲的基本信息,并发挥了适当的想象。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语,包含形容词比较级和非谓语动词的准确使用为文章增色不少.文中句与句和段与段的衔接和过度更加自然,如First of all What’s more,学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
【考点定位】提纲作文。