根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,内容须包括:对下表中关于(City A和City B)的全部信息进行比较,分析利弊,确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。
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City A |
City B |
Flying |
2 hours |
4 hours |
Temperature |
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Hotel |
★★ |
★★★★ |
Things to do |
★★★★ |
★★ |
Food |
★★ |
★★★★ |
In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
写作亮点:本篇作文按照题目要求选择了城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。对于城市A的缺点,作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于优点则重点突出,因为在城市A可以做很多事情,作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较的时候,作者用了多种方式,使句子不单调,比如在比较温度时,直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”,比较食物时,用了“as…as”等。在说选择城市A的原因时,用了that引导的宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句,显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。
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