请根据以下交通事故因素(factors)统计图表,以“Major causes of traffic accidents” 为题,用英语写一篇简短的分析报告,向学校英语报投稿。
注意:
1. 报告需逐条陈述下面 pie chart 和 bar chart (柱状图) 中呈现的主 要内容。(至少 5 点)
2. 提出你对交通安全总的看法。(至少 2 点)
3. 词数:100 词左右,所给标题不计入总词数。
范文参考:
Major Causes of Traffic Accidents
Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspapers, TV news and so on. As a result, it’s important for us to analyze the major causes. The followings are two reports:
According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors: 85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is environment factors. Among them, it’s quite clear that the first one is the key point. So another bar chart points that there are 4 reasons to causes it, including spending which is 50%, drunk driving which holds 15%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 25%.
In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. The harder we try, the happier our life will be!
写作指导:
一、总述:
本年中考书面表达为说明议论文,写作要求需符合16字写作方针,及“切题,思路清晰,少量语法错误、语言亮点。”
二、写作思路:
第一段:(点题) 交通安全事故频发,引出表格。
第二段:(分析表格内容)
表格一:驾驶员因素 85%,交通因素 5%,环境因素 10%。 表格二:超速 50%,酒驾 15%,疲劳驾驶 25%,不系安全带 25%。
第三段:(自己观点)
1.具备交通安全意识。 2.拥护交通规则。