命题作文

Jack 今年18岁，爱好旅游。上个周末，他和朋友一起去海南游玩，度过了愉快的两天。根据表格中提供的信息，再适当增加想象，加以拓展，使Jack 的这次海南之行更生动。要求意思连贯，书写端正，字数60左右，注意时态。

I have a friend. His name is Jack.. Last weekend he and his friends went to the Hainan. In Saturaday, he visited Sanya. He took photos. On Sunday moring he went to seaside. He played volleyball with his friends. In the afternoon he swam in sea. In the evening he ate fish, went shopping. He went home at 10pm.

点评:
1.went to the Hainan中的定冠词the应去掉,就应说成went to Hainan.
2.In Saturday中的介词应换成On,即On Saturday
3.On Sunday moring应说成On Sunday morning.
4.根据题意,最后一句应加上by plane,即He went home at 10 pm by plane.