请你介绍一下你的一日三餐,并简单介绍你妈妈的饮食爱好。
(60字左右)。
I have a great breatfast.I often eat noodles,milk and bread. My mother usually eats porridge. She thinks it’s very healthy, but I don’t like it. At lunch, I like eating meal, potatoes, rice and tofu. My mother likes eating some vegetable and rice, but I don’t like eating some vegetable. At dinner, I like eating rice, meal and some fruit.
点评:短文整体写得不错,只是个别名词应用复数,如vegetable,fruit.