假如你叫李乐乐,家住中国萍乡。请你根据所给提示,给你在澳大利亚的笔友Larry写一封信,介绍一下你的情况,并欢迎他暑假来玩。可适当发挥。要求:60词左右。
1.学校情况:所在学校、班级(华兴中学、708班);最喜欢的学科…
2.生活情况:家庭人数(3人);家在动物园附近,周末经常去动物园;最喜欢的动物…
3.天气情况:所在城市的夏天的天气…
Dear Larry,
How are you?My name is Li Le Le. I live in Pingxiang of China. I study in huaxing school. I am in class eight grade seven. I like English very much, because they’re very interesting. But I don’t like maths,they’re too difficult. My home is near the zoo,so on weekend,I often go to zoo. I like pandas because they’re cute. My family have three people:I, my mother and my father. In my city, in summer, the weather is too hot.
Welcome to you go to my city!
Yours,
Li Lele
点评:要点都写到了,只是在一些表达上存在一些问题:
1.注意大小写,学校的名称,班级名称,年级名称都是要大写的.
2.注意名词单复数的前后呼应,比如I like English very much,because they're interesting.句中的they're 应改成it's
3.go to the zoo.
4.家里有多少口人通常用there be结构,即There are three people in my family.
5.在谈到多人时,I通常放在所有人的后面,比如My mother,my father and I