My favorite food is hamburger,French fries and chicken.........Because that is crisp.My favorite fruit is grape watermelon and strawberry,but I don't like sour grape.I don't like rice that is dull.I don't like balsam because balsam is bitter.what about you?

点评：这篇作文比先前几篇有了很大的进步，一是关注了大小写，二是标点符号更规范了。加油啊！另外，想对作文的布局提一些建议，如果能分段描写，每段侧重某一类，效果会更好些，这样会显得更有条理，有逻辑性，比如第二段描写“我”喜欢的食物，包括它们的特点，形状等，另一段描写“我”喜欢的水果，包括它们的特点等。