There are seven days in a week. Which day is my favourite day? It’s Friday.
On Friday, I have P.E. class and art class. I like doing sports and drawing pictures. I have fish, beef, egg and green beans for lunch. They are my favourite food. And on Friday evening, I can watch TV for a long time, and I can play computer games, too. But if it was really Friday everyday, that would be not good, either. Because I will not have weekends. Oh, no! I don’t want it to be Friday everyday now.
Can you tell me about your favourite day?（长安镇第一小学五（2）黄乐瑶,指导教师：钟燕玲）
点评：本文小作者写出最喜欢的一天，与其他作文平淡无奇相比，这篇作文没有仅仅写出这一天有什么课，做了什么事情，而是笔锋一转，写出如果每天都是星期五，那么就失去快乐的周末，可见学生的想法是多么可爱。