湖北省咸宁市2013年中考英语书面表达
三年快乐而充实的初中生活结束了,你将进入高中(中职)学校学习。展望未来,你对高中(中职)生活充满期待。请以“I Expect My School Life”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
要求:(1)内容要点:①生活、学习环境(餐厅,图书馆,运动场……);②师生、同学关系;③生活多彩、学业进步;④补充一点自己的想法。]
(2)文章不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;要点齐全,语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,可以适当发挥。
(3)提示词:get along with;colorful(adj.);knowledge;habit
I Expect My School Life
书面表达 (本大题共1个小题,共12分)
评分项目] |
分值 |
档 次 |
给 分 说 明 | ||
好 |
中 |
差 | |||
书写规范 |
2 |
2 |
1 |
0 |
标点及大小写错误0~1个属好,2~4个属中,5个以上属差。 |
长度适中 |
2 |
2 |
1 |
0 |
80~120词属好,30~79词或120词以上属中,29词以下属差。(范文词数仅供参考) |
要点齐全 |
4 |
4 |
3 |
1 |
每个要点1分,允许合理想象。 |
句子通顺 语言准确 |
4 |
4 |
3 |
1 |
单词及语法错误0~1个属好,2~4个属中,5个以上属差。 |
One possible version: (118 words)
I Expect My School Life
I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me.
I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.
As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.