山东省聊城市2013年中考英语书面表达
在父亲节(
年龄 外貌 职业 |
40 又高又胖,短头发,大眼睛 (数学)教师,(工作努力,上课活泼生动,深受学生喜爱) |
性格 爱好 |
诚实,善良 打乒乓球 |
注意:
1.80词左右。
可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
My father
My father
My father is a 40-year-old math teacher. He is tall and fat with short hair and big eyes. He always works hard. His classes are lively and interesting and deeply loved by his students.
My father is an honest and kind man. He often helps other children and me with our maths.
My father'’s hobby is playing table tennis. We often play table tennis together at the weekends.
My father is not only a good father but also a good friend. I have learned a lot from him . I love my father very much.
作文:
1. 单词错误三处扣1分;
2. 语法错误两处扣1分;
3. 小作文只要符合语境、语言规律,使用过去时、完成时、一般现在时均可得分。
大作文分四档:
1. 一档作文:13-15分,书写工整、规范,内容丰富,语言流畅,条理清晰,无语法错误、单词拼写错误或错误极少;
2. 二档作文:10-12分,书写比较工整,内容比较丰富,语言流畅,条理清晰,有少量语法及单词错误;
3. 三档作文:6-9分, 书写不够工整, 内容不够丰富,语言不够流畅,条理不够清晰,有部分语法及单词错误;
4. 四档作文:0-5分, 字迹潦草, 内容不丰富,语言不流畅,条理不清晰,有很多语法及单词错误。