Hello! I’m Jack. I’m 12.
Last weekend, I was very happy. Do you want to know it? It was my 12th birthday last weekend. Many friends came to my birthday party. We had birthday cake. We sang and danced together. My parents and friends gave me some nice and beautiful presents. How happy I was!
This weekend, my brother and I went to the zoo. We saw birds, horses and monkeys. The monkeys were funny. We looked at them and they looked at us, too. The monkeys took some bananas from our baskets. They were happy, but we weren’t. Then, we went to the gym. We did sports together. We were happy!
Next weekend, I am going to take a trip with my parents. We are going to Huangshan. We are going there by plane. We are going to have a good time.
This is my weekend. What about yours? What do you do on your weekends?(指导教师:曹娟)
点评:本文准确的使用了过去时,而且还在结尾处运用了将来时,课见作者对时态掌握得非常好。看文章内容,还真是一个繁忙的周末,如果有这么多事情要做,看来他可能需要“another weekend”。