Hi! I’m Cindy. I’m 11. I like blue. I like math. My favourite food is tofu. It’s healthy. My favourite fruit is grapes. They are sour. I’m active and smart. I have short hair, big eyes and small mouth. I often do my homework and play sports on Saturdays. On Sundays, I often do my read books. I’m a helpful girl. I can empty the trash. I can sweep the floor. I can cook the meals. But I can’t wash the clothes. I’d like to have a try. Miss ye is my favourite teacher. She’s my English teacher. She’s short and strong. She has long hair. She’s very young. She’d strict, but she’s very kind. She’d smart and active , too. I like Miss Ye very much. I get up at 6:30. I usually eat breakfast at 7:00. I often go to school at 7:15. I eat lunch at 6:00.I usually have English class at 8:00. I often eat dinner at 6:00. I do homework at 7:00. I usually watch TV at 8:30. I often go to bed at 9:00. This is my day. And you ? My favourite seasom is summer. I can swim. This is me. Do you like me?

Class 1,Grade 5 Cindy(邝希婷)

Comments: In this composition, the student can write clearly about favourite food、favourite day、favourite teacher .The student can write her day. Well done! (By VickyYe)