There are four seasons in a year.

Spring is a best season in a year. It’s from March to May. The sky is blue. The clouds are white. There are many birds singing in the sky. Everything begins to grow. Grass and trees begin to turn green. Flowers begin to come out. Children begin to fly kites outdoors. Spring is green.

Summer is from June to August. The weather is from June to August. The weather is usually very hot. Everyone likes go swimming in the river, lake or sea.

Fall is a harvest season. It’s usually very cool. Fall is yellow. Farmers are busy.

Winter is last season. It often snows. Children are happy. Because they can make a snowman.. Winter is white.

Four seasons are colouful. I love all the seasons. Because they are all beautiful.

Which season do you like best? Can you tell me, please!

点评：看到这篇文章真想不到是一名小学五年级的学生所写，而且是在学校现场作文比赛时，只用了半个小时的时间。文章用词准确，词汇量丰富，而且语言非常的优美，生动。难能可贵！